Hands of hope reaching out to help,
beaten blue, clutched and tied to grip.
Am hurt, Am bleeding in agony and pain,
it's the warmth of others that hopes for a gain.
I may die, I may wither, I may snap
but i will never give up trying to help.
Let's embrace each other and spread humanity
for the strength of life lies in our unity!
16 comments:
Hi Divya, I love your view on this. I have been waiting for someone to use this picture and was excited when I saw it on your page.
I figured most writers would have the characters asking for help, reaching out, but you are offering help even when hurting. This is awesome! It shows your true character of loving others. I really like that.
It is nice to meet you and I will return and explore your other posts soon. Good luck in the contest!
Thanks so much for dropping by :-) I am humbled by your feedback! Pleasure to know you!
Omagosh, Let me catch my breath
I actually didn’t think that anyone would opt for this prompt.
Simple yet so forceful in the meaning. The way you have brought up an optimistic meaning from a depressing image is high commendable.
Well Done And Good Luck”
Posting on behalf of Olivia http://www.wix.com/olivia_152011/girlinveil#!comment-on-poem
Hi divya,precise but very good one, u described the picture in a very precise manner but very artistically and according to me its an ability .so, Good luck for the contest Smile
good topic, well written. It could've been longer, and more emotional. Please keep writing.
beautiful poem
never stop
Thanks for your honest feedback!
Thank you :-)
woooooooooow so short :D and meaningful :)
why cant i keep it short like normal people :D
anywayz :D here's the link to my entry :)
http://a7madkhalifa.wordpress.com/2012/01/15/picture-worth-your-words-contest-thousands-of-hands/
Thank you! :-)
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the poem is such a positive one. shot n beautiful
but to be frank i was a bit scared by the pic
Yes, i indeed missed your comment! Thanks for the sweet words.
Brilliant. So positive and caring in your approach. The poem shows the type of person you are. I will also remember the advise you gave me on my blog. :) Thanks Divya. :)
Thank you so much Akshay :-)
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