tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7499184846519133526.post6402693863038189392..comments2023-10-24T02:10:26.311-07:00Comments on Entwined thoughts - ready to be straightened out !: A night to rememberDivyahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03993639764542830773noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7499184846519133526.post-32444346668904129362012-01-11T20:07:52.180-08:002012-01-11T20:07:52.180-08:00I felt the end was incomplete. But I would say you...I felt the end was incomplete. But I would say you made some strong characters and a decent plot. Good work. Keep it up. :)<br /><br />Do check out my recent short fiction :<br /><br />http://insanemoviegeek.blogspot.com/2012/01/short-story-robbery.htmlvinayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02483120636245740181noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7499184846519133526.post-81850582779826853022010-03-23T08:10:40.069-07:002010-03-23T08:10:40.069-07:00@ Nirmal - Its an absolute fantasy !! I guess i am...@ Nirmal - Its an absolute fantasy !! I guess i am already getting passionate about writing :) Well, from my point of view, Reema does not expect Vikas in her husband till she realizes the differences between them(Reema and her husband), and on realization it is but natural for a women to compare her man with men she has held in such positions :) And the end is they are together !! rest is left to the reader :)<br /><br />@ Krishnan - Well, regarding the depth, may be could have added more, but the essence is they together couldn't sail through the rough tides. I am gonna try to write more :)Divyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03993639764542830773noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7499184846519133526.post-64998003274291580232010-03-22T23:23:50.804-07:002010-03-22T23:23:50.804-07:00The story was an amazing read.. I was eagerly read...The story was an amazing read.. I was eagerly reading thro for knowing the finish. The description of the kind of person Reema wanted was superb.. I liked it very much.. Also the parallel narrative of his (Vikas') and her (Reema's)life happenings was striking. <br /><br />Only thing I felt which you could have added to the story was the depth in the reason behind the breakup of Vikas and Rita.. Since the other pair's breakup description clearly had more weightage... <br /><br />English language is ur bunny I guess.. :):)<br />Long live ur English teacher!!!<br /><br />Waiting for more stories from ur desk!!! <br />Keep them pouring!!!Krishnanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01662131423484283913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7499184846519133526.post-28896345372318427792010-03-22T18:42:26.848-07:002010-03-22T18:42:26.848-07:00Divya,
Good One!!
You have a nice flow in writin...Divya,<br /> <br />Good One!!<br />You have a nice flow in writing and relating events. <br /><br />Engineering,MS,land of million dreams, friendship,just another software engineer, I think many can relate to it.<br /> <br />Well, regarding story, are Reema and Vikas getting married again? Is that what the ending is supposed to mean?<br /><br />I am not sure or I think I might be biased..it looked as though Reema would be biased when it comes to handing her ex husband because she expects Vikas in him which is never possible in reality. She should have thought about it before marrying that guy! If she goes to an extent of breaking a marriage I am sure she must be frustrated with that guy.<br /> <br />You are very passionate about public speaking and I am sure after some time writing would be in that list!!<br /><br />Finally I have a belief that stories are inspired from real life much like the ones Gautham makes.... <br /><br />Is this something picked from real life in sense friend/nearby etc or more a fantasy one? :)<br /><br />Keep writing!!!Nimmehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00526449147699248405noreply@blogger.com